Great track - needs a bit more variation
You did a great job on the melody, but after a while it gets a bit repetitive. I love your synths though - really great energy in the song. Also, I'm not sure if its just me, but there is a bit of distortion/clipping at the beginning of the song. Great Job!
Great work, but a little refinment is needed
The drums are much better in this piece than the last one. Only problem I have with it is that sometimes the crowd patch overpowers the actual music. Great job!
Awesome!
I have to say, we did a good job on this. Only, the first crowd patch got cut off... or not faded or something. We'll fix that then upload a fixed one. Thanks for listening!
Nice progression!
Your song has a really nice melody. You use a good combination of intruments to get your song across - but I think they need a fuller sound. Try either turning up the unison, or adding a delay/reverb effect. Also I like how the chords you play compliment each other, while creating a almost tense feeling. Well done, and keep it up!
Yeah, I went back over this song and added some effects to the melody (delay and such) and powered the whole thing up.
Great harmony and melody
This song has great harmony and melody. I love the diffrent patterns and such. One thing I think that you could improve would be the deepness, or quality of you synths. Try the ToxicIII plugin, that has some good depth (or just turn up the render quality/unison on the existing ones :P)
Yeah, I really wanted a blurred feel to this song. Kind of like a dream. But quality wise is due to having to render at a much lower quality than the one on my pc :P
I make Trance, Eurodance and Ambient music. I'm new, but learning fast.
Age 35, Male
Student
Vancouver Film School, Sound
Vancouver, BC
Joined on 9/1/04
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